February 26

100wc rewrite

so I know this one girl and she thinks that she can get what ever she wants and one day she was walking down the side of the road.  On the other side of the road she saw a really big teddy bear and she wanted it so much and then she screamed at her mum because she didn’t let her cross the road to get it. When they got home it was time to open the the presents because it was her birthday. It was her last present and she still hadn’t got the bear. she opened it, guess what it was!

Posted February 26, 2019 by sophie's something blog in category Uncategorised

1 thoughts on “100wc rewrite

  1. libby2016

    Great work Sophie. I love the way you have organised your ideas to write a very cohesive piece. Make sure next time you write that you plan first. This way your writing is more likely to flow smoothly.


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