August 15

100 WC As I turned my head the world spun

All of a sudden my head starts to spin, it doesn’t stop. I can hardly stand. I see some people running, I try to look over but as I turn my head the world spins. As I touch my face I feel that it is damp, and slimy, sticky and  disgusting. I try to open my eyes, but I’m covered in slobber. I clean my my eyes and open to a brand new puppy. I am so exited. I was sort of bothered about the slobber before but not any more because I don’t really care, its a puppy!

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Posted August 15, 2019 by sophie's something blog in category Uncategorised

1 thoughts on “100 WC As I turned my head the world spun

  1. libby2016

    I love the twist in this piece Sophie. I was certainly NOT expecting a puppy with the way you started the piece. Just look carefully at the sentence ‘As I touch my face I feel that it is damp, and slimy, sticky and disgusting.’ Remembering the lesson we did on commas, look at the list you have created. You should have used commas between each item except for the last one when you use ‘and’.

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