All of a sudden I get up and open the curtain where purple beams of the morning sunrise shines through my window. As I stomp like an elephant on my way to the lounge room I wake up nelson the family dog I suddenly remember it is Christmas morning. I try to find a present with my name on it. I suddenly see a tank on the mantel piece. As I get closer I realize there is a seahorse much like the color of an avocado. As I look down to see nelson I realize he is wanting a bone.
All of a sudden my head starts to spin, it doesn’t stop. I can hardly stand. I see some people running, I try to look over but as I turn my head the world spins. As I touch my face I feel that it is damp, and slimy, sticky and disgusting. I try to open my eyes, but I’m covered in slobber. I clean my my eyes and open to a brand new puppy. I am so exited. I was sort of bothered about the slobber before but not any more because I don’t really care, its a puppy!
I think that you should come to Moonee ponds primary science night because it will teach you some pretty cool things. At the science night the 5/6 s will be showing you some our ideas of how to stop space debris and also try to encourage you to help stop it too. The the 3/4 s and 1/2 s will be showing you some interesting facts and projects about the moon as well to it is Nasa’s 5oth anniversary. There will be some cool hands on activity’s that you can do. please come along to the celebration and don’t forget to bring your binoculars!
I wake up to realise that all my siblings are gone, I start to panic and think about all the things that could have happened to them then I start to panic even more. But then I realise that that would never have happened because they wouldn’t be able to get out of the room that fast. All of a sudden I remember something that makes me want to scream, I jump up and get dressed as fast as I can. I run down stairs to see my family waiting for me with a giant present with domino wrapping paper.
I think you did really good because you made it relate to the real world and also I think it would be really good if you could make a second story to it because I think that lot of people would like to hear a second story to it. One question I have, was the shop in the real world or in the game? But otherwise good job!
I think you have done a really good job with making the reader wanting to read the rest of the story because it makes you want to know what happens next, and when you make the hat disappear and then come back, you could even try to make a second part to it and make a series because I think a lot of people would want to know what happens next. Good job!
I think that you did a really good job because you left us in suspense at the end and made us want to keep on reading, so then we want to read more of your stories. Good job!
at the start of the story I like how you used adjectives and then that led to me wanting to read more, I also like how you gave us a cliffhanger and it would be even better if you made a second series of it because lots of people wold want to know what happens next. Good job!
Mum dad whats the time! Sadie yells as she is hurrying to get ready for school. All of a sudden Sadie grabs her scooter and realises how late she will be. she hurls through the house and starts rushing down the road on her scooter. It’s all ready 9.05 and school starts at 9.00.
Miss Rose I’m hear, Sadie exclaims as she rushes into the room. Miss Rose excitedly turns to the class and realises that it is the first time the whole class has been at school on one day. this day has been very transparent as well as very tiring.
I don’t think the supermarkets should have banned plastic bags. I think they have tried to distract people from their bad decision by bringing in stikeezs and re-usable bags. Also when you forget your bags you just have to pay more money to buy more bags so personally I think none of it really makes a difference.
First of all I think that they should not have banned plastic bags because they just started to bring in little shops, stikeezs and tiles while they were making the decision to ban plastic bags. So basically they were just making more plastic plus the re-usable bags. Have you ever realised how much plastic they use when they are doing stikeezs, little shops and tiles? Because if you think about it is actually more than you think.
My other reason is when you forget your bags you just buy more and waste more money on buying bags and it could make a big difference. At the moment some have said as few as 3 percent of reusable bags are actually being reused so how does that make you feel and people are spending 11 million dollars every year on re-usable bags. And also if you buy too much bags you eventually will have too many bags and you won’t want to chuck them in the bin because otherwise they might go into the sea. You don’t want that to happen, right? And when people complain about pollution they still make lots of it when they are making the reusable bags and everyone thinks that it has actually made a difference when it hasn’t.
My third reason why I think they should not have banned plastic bags is because now that they have brought in reusable bags people like using them so much that they take them everywhere and then they leave them at the beach and other places. This then then causes a similar amount of pollution to that caused by the old plastic bags. Therefore it doesn’t really make a difference to the environment.
Now overall these are some of the main reasons why I think they should not have banned plastic bags. They brought in stikeezs and all that sort of stuff and then also when people forget their bags they just have to buy more and it creates more plastic and wastes your money. Last but not least people crave their reusable plastic bags and then they take them everywhere and forget them. So that is why I think that they should not have banned plastic bags.
”Hey mum!” Maya yells as her and Ashley come out of their tent. ”What?” mum replies. ”What happened last night?!” questioned Ashley. Then mum looked around and saw what was left of the beautiful valley and her mouth dropped. Then we realised how lucky we were to have chosen to set up our tent in the cave because of the storm. Then I suddenly thought about Alice who’s family had wanted to set up their tent under the stars but where are they? There was only broken branches and mud where their campsight had been. Then I heard a noise……………
Today I was so cross that I nearly broke my drumstick ( obviously the music not the food because…… I don’t know why but you get what I mean) because my brother pranked me and I got so annoyed it is not funny. HE MADE ME FALL IN CAT POOP! So this is how it went, he distracted me by putting up a picture on the wall then he made me trip on a piece of string then I fell into the cat poop that he put in front of me. But he did get told off big time.
As I was walking down the street to drop off my letter I had a sinking feeling inside as if something bad was going to happen. I guess I was wrong, I found 5 coins just laying on the pavement in front of me. But then I realised what they really were, they were bolts that had just popped out of the ladder beside me. But then I found myself covered in red paint and a big bump on my head from the ladder. I think I kind of jinxed myself. Well, I guess I will have to write another letter.